[It takes you through the woods, across a piece of privately owned land prone to potholes and landslides. I ran the whole way. Takes you ten minutes instead of the usual twenty five. I don't remember how many times I had to haul his drunk arse home. Not that I got any thanks. Jerry'd be too drunk to remember.
Feel free to be all Death of the Author (wow, that sounds creepy in the context of this comic, yike!) but is the dynamic between the guys a bit of a shoutout to the Prodigal Son, or is it just "human nature is the same wherever you go"?
Author Note
Moth
I don't like how I drew Dylan in the first panel. Looks real stiff. I'd redraw it if either of my computers were actually working properly :T
I like the rest of the page though.
Comments
demcleod
I think Dylan looks great in the first panel. But I understand. Us artists are our own worst critics! XD
Moth
We totally are. We should all cut ourselves a break :')
I swear this time though, half my annoyance comes from the fact that I can't freaking edit it..!
joeyballast
Drawing people in that kind of running position is really tough. It almost always ends up looking kind of stiff.
Also, I wonder where he got the key...
Moth
It looked alright as a sketch and then just went downhill :')
ooh! The key is explained in... chapter 4! (I'm enjoying having a complete script for once. Too much.)
Meld
I've missed this comic. Wonderful work!
Moth
Thanks :D It's good to be back, too.
The Doodler
Feel free to be all Death of the Author (wow, that sounds creepy in the context of this comic, yike!) but is the dynamic between the guys a bit of a shoutout to the Prodigal Son, or is it just "human nature is the same wherever you go"?