[He always did this.]
DYLAN: Jerry?
[Jerry would go out, lose track of time]
DYLAN: What a mess...
[And try to stumble across town on his own, leaving his phone… and the keys. He used to take a shortcut he thought only he knew about.]
I think my favourite series of panels are the ones in the bottom left.
All the little details (the can, crumpled paper, headphones, random thumbtack, etc) are awesome. It's also an emotional indicator going from the cool purple to the rage red (left your key again goddamit!)
Populating environments is something I'm working on, and I think you do a really good job of it.
Well, (if I remember correctly) in the old version he had some reasons to be bitter, even if killing his brother was a huge overreaction. I wonder if it's going to be the same in the new one...
Author Note
Moth
Jerry's room is still tidier than mine.
Comments
Alicia
I'm seriously jealous of those perspective drawings, both interiors and exteriors. Very nice!
Moth
Thank you! I looove perspectives~
Vivocateur
Ooo ahh! Yes, that perspective is glorious.
(Also, 11 missed calls?!?)
Moth
Thanks :D
Yeaahh, James worries about his son :< and Jerry never checks his phone
demcleod
This comic is really good. I love your art style! :-)
Moth
Thank you! :D
NoiV
Aaaaah
Why is every panel so perfect?
Even the ones where Dylan isn't.
Moth
The answer is witchcraft. Lots of witchcraft.
aaait'snotperfectbutthankyou *v*
joeyballast
I think my favourite series of panels are the ones in the bottom left.
All the little details (the can, crumpled paper, headphones, random thumbtack, etc) are awesome. It's also an emotional indicator going from the cool purple to the rage red (left your key again goddamit!)
Populating environments is something I'm working on, and I think you do a really good job of it.
Moth
When I showed those panels to my sister, she just looked at them funny and went 'why did you split it into three?'
Anyway, thanks! I like drawing this kind of detail. If I get stuck, I just look at all the trash on my own desk ¬_¬
azureXtwilight
Lookit all the details *_*
Moth
Details? Wh- how did they get there?!
:>
Bobblit
Poor Dylan sounds so bitter.
Moth
He's very bitter. Unreasonably bitter.
Bobblit
Well, (if I remember correctly) in the old version he had some reasons to be bitter, even if killing his brother was a huge overreaction. I wonder if it's going to be the same in the new one...
Elkardon
The perspectives are great