"Then we can just...
hang out and have a good time. We'll go explore the world, backpacking or something, on our own, so nobody's there to remind me I don't bloody exist.
It's gonna be good."
tbh I feel like that would be the best for both of them.
No matter how you look at it, in my opinion anyway, a ghost has no longer any business in the world. It is time to let him go :(
But at least in some official way. True.
So much ouch. Jerry’s dialogue in the bottom half of the page hits like ten consecutive punches to the gut. It really shows how scared and cornered and distressed about all of this he is and drives it home hard. Damn, that’s sad. And then the range of emotions we get to see from Dylan, from that fear and grief to complete suppression and then trying to be a brother again - it’s wild but you’ve made it believable. This is a good update, strong 10/10, gotta go pick up the pieces of my heart off the floor
Thinking about the future must be rough for Jerry, he's just finding it hard to keep it together right now, I'm sure he'll be fiiine : )
Thank you! This is honestly a scene I spent a lot of time thinking about before, writing loads and cutting loads out to try and get juuuust the right amount of sad
I think it is really cool to see again how Dylan felt. While I am sure plenty of killers were always convinced, it made sense for Dylan to immediately feel like it is something that should be solved by supernatural powers on spot. Terrifying...
So uh... How many killers can say they later tried to comfort their victim? Sheesh. If this ever gets like a dark humor parody then there is plenty of material here :D
Mmmh, of course there's a moment when Jeery had to face Death for real. I wonder where he'll go, I suppose he'll have to leave after all.
I feel for him. :<
I don't think he *has* to leave, Malachy existed for a decade after he died so,,
Though it can't be nice for jerry thinking about what kind of future he has.
Author Note
Moth
Dylan's bad at comforting. anyone know why he's googling that?
Comments
OhHeyItsMe
"Then we can just...
hang out and have a good time. We'll go explore the world, backpacking or something, on our own, so nobody's there to remind me I don't bloody exist.
It's gonna be good."
<3
Moth
:D
Seems like so far on Tapas people think he's trying to find a way to escape or just ignoring Jerry or something :')
griffsketch
Aaaaah that’s why?? I didn’t think this page could get MORE emotional
Wooster
I really really hope this is the reason. It would be so sweet.
MadJak91
tbh I feel like that would be the best for both of them.
No matter how you look at it, in my opinion anyway, a ghost has no longer any business in the world. It is time to let him go :(
But at least in some official way. True.
griffsketch
Thank you moth, for these tears in my eyes :’)
So much ouch. Jerry’s dialogue in the bottom half of the page hits like ten consecutive punches to the gut. It really shows how scared and cornered and distressed about all of this he is and drives it home hard. Damn, that’s sad. And then the range of emotions we get to see from Dylan, from that fear and grief to complete suppression and then trying to be a brother again - it’s wild but you’ve made it believable. This is a good update, strong 10/10, gotta go pick up the pieces of my heart off the floor
Moth
Thinking about the future must be rough for Jerry, he's just finding it hard to keep it together right now, I'm sure he'll be fiiine : )
Thank you! This is honestly a scene I spent a lot of time thinking about before, writing loads and cutting loads out to try and get juuuust the right amount of sad
MadJak91
I think it is really cool to see again how Dylan felt. While I am sure plenty of killers were always convinced, it made sense for Dylan to immediately feel like it is something that should be solved by supernatural powers on spot. Terrifying...
So uh... How many killers can say they later tried to comfort their victim? Sheesh. If this ever gets like a dark humor parody then there is plenty of material here :D
NoiV
Mmmh, of course there's a moment when Jeery had to face Death for real. I wonder where he'll go, I suppose he'll have to leave after all.
I feel for him. :<
Moth
I don't think he *has* to leave, Malachy existed for a decade after he died so,,
Though it can't be nice for jerry thinking about what kind of future he has.