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Author Note

18th May 2019, 2:19 PM edit | delete

A lot of this conversation is effectively what I moved from the start of Deepwell because I didn't want to break the flow, so

They're gonna talk at last!



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18th May 2019, 4:24 PM edit | delete | reply

The last panel: Surprise legs!


18th May 2019, 5:37 PM edit | delete | reply

hfhhfkkj
surprise legs are always very scary


18th May 2019, 4:36 PM edit | delete | reply

Ahhh chest pains

This update huuurts. Jerry’s just having the worst kind of day, that poor boy. But at least they’re finally talking! Good decision to move this conversation to here, it flows really well this way


18th May 2019, 5:35 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you! His day has had way too many emotions crammed into it, I felt a it weird putting sad Jerry immediately after happy Jerry from the previous scene but I dunno, he's just feeling multiple things now


18th May 2019, 5:30 PM edit | delete | reply

I mean, I'd be scared too. I mean just look at those high-tops! So last season.

But more seriously, I think it was a smart idea to move this discussion to this point. The ambiance where things have cooled down flows much better at Chris's vs earlier in the story.

Plus, I love how ghost mechanics are slipping in here.


18th May 2019, 5:33 PM edit | delete | reply

look it's still 2016 in this story, who knows what fashion was doing back then


Thanks! I also rewrote this scene a lot to try not to make it huuugely long but still explain all the things it needed to


18th May 2019, 7:41 PM edit | delete | reply

As a (future) psychologist, I would really like to see everyone from this comic at a looong long therapy. I know there's sadly no hope for Jerry but can I at least assume Dylan gets some proffesional help in the future? c: He desperately needs it.

Also this is definitely my visually favorite page so far, I love everything about the 4th panel and the colors <3


20th May 2019, 8:39 AM edit | delete | reply

Thank you! I was happy with those panels too, using purple and green was fun!

And yeahhh a bit of therapising wouldn't be amiss, I'll send them to you o future psychologist ;)


19th May 2019, 3:15 AM edit | delete | reply

The dialogue on this page is really nice, especially the first panel


20th May 2019, 8:40 AM edit | delete | reply

Thank you! :D


19th May 2019, 6:02 PM edit | delete | reply

So basically they can now attempt some sort of duplication glitch. Dylan needs to die wearing that jacket so he can come back wearing it and then somebody else will take the real one and... huh. lmao

For real though: I hope Jerry can forgive him next and move on. What is done is done. He should find real peace as a ghost. Slowly but surely I do not even want to see Dylan punished... So many catalysts to everything so what is even fair at this point.


20th May 2019, 8:45 AM edit | delete | reply

Forget factories and production lines this is the true way to mass produce a product!

At this point perhaps Dylan has suffered enough



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