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What are you gonna do, Dyl? I'm sure it will be good and nice and not get anyone into any trouble.
I thumbnailed all of the next chapter and it ended up super short again, now I've gotta thumbnail the ast chapter and see if there's any moving about/adding stuff that can be done to make it more sensible. I'll post the cover on saturday, probably go straight into the next chapter on wednesday. cheers.
Dear GOD that grin. Dylan, what in the hell are you planning? I also love how nonchalant Jerry is about finding out he probably killed someone...but to be fair, the dude’s still around and Jer is in the same boat.
Maaan, this page. There’s just Too Much Good Stuff(TM). Jeremy sticking by his brother, poor Dylan having to vicariously experience being dead, the suspense of whatever he is about to do regarding Robin, that last callback line to chapter fkn one - it’s all so intense and feels like it’s only ramping up. Mad kudos my dude
This has been such a fantastic, wild ride! I'm sure the upcoming pages will top it and give us an interesting resolution, but in the meantime, I've really enjoyed the reveals and character development up to this point. For better or worse, Malachy has been a (positive?) influence on Jerry's and Dylan's relationship as brothers. Maybe they'll both come out better for the experience.
I like how Jerry can switch to no-BS attitude and decide to get things done. Now that there is no point in niceties anymore. Kill or get killed and since they both tasted it before it is just a matter of opinion if the next guy related to this mess has to go. Sheesh!
I mean, is there even any need to talk about how deep both of them are in this now?
Both Rob and Mal wanted to leave this place. Both are dead. Jerry also had plans. He is dead. Looking at you now Dylan whether you are going to close the circle. Or start a new one with your death...
I can't think of anything witty to say, but I really love this page, so I want to leave a comment anyway c: That was en excellent chapter, I definitely didn't expect the Final Fight to be Mal vs Jerry, but I loved the surprise and it's honestly better than anything I could imagine <3
Oh, I meant the final fight of the chapter, I know there's more to come!
I somehow expected it would be Dylan confronting Mal, since he was the one who dragged Jerry into the hospital and was hoping for an... outcome? But it was Jerry's time to be in the spotlight and he did great!
Dylan… honey… you have got to stop solving all your problems by killing everyone, it's just, it's not really a recommended therapeutic approach sweetie
Author Note
Moth
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What are you gonna do, Dyl? I'm sure it will be good and nice and not get anyone into any trouble.
I thumbnailed all of the next chapter and it ended up super short again, now I've gotta thumbnail the ast chapter and see if there's any moving about/adding stuff that can be done to make it more sensible. I'll post the cover on saturday, probably go straight into the next chapter on wednesday. cheers.
Comments
Guest
OHHHHHHH MAN DYLAN'S GOT A PLAN AND IT'S GONNA GET SERIOUS.
I love how the brothers are both in on this. Such a nice change from how they were before.
Great way to end this chapter! And congrats on the thumbnailing! Best of luck!
Guest
((this is wr3h i forgot to sign in because i got too excited LOL))
Moth
LOL
i can't believe all it took to bring them together was one of them dying and the other getting a massive haunting
griffsketch
Dear GOD that grin. Dylan, what in the hell are you planning? I also love how nonchalant Jerry is about finding out he probably killed someone...but to be fair, the dude’s still around and Jer is in the same boat.
Maaan, this page. There’s just Too Much Good Stuff(TM). Jeremy sticking by his brother, poor Dylan having to vicariously experience being dead, the suspense of whatever he is about to do regarding Robin, that last callback line to chapter fkn one - it’s all so intense and feels like it’s only ramping up. Mad kudos my dude
Moth
it's always nice to see him smile : )
Jerry's barely paying attention to what Dylan's saying, he's kind of babbling so
Hehehee thanks :D Yeah dylan got smacked in the face with ten years of isolation packed into a couple minutes. things are going well.
Thracecius
This has been such a fantastic, wild ride! I'm sure the upcoming pages will top it and give us an interesting resolution, but in the meantime, I've really enjoyed the reveals and character development up to this point. For better or worse, Malachy has been a (positive?) influence on Jerry's and Dylan's relationship as brothers. Maybe they'll both come out better for the experience.
Moth
Thank you very much! There's a lot I would do better if I started over, but I'm pretty proud of it as a whole, particularly the last few chapters :D
And maybe Malachy should look into becoming a therapist, he's brought these boys so close together!
Vivocateur
Hhmm...that is NOT smile of a man with something nice in mind.
Moth
the dimples of a sweet innocent cherub : )
MadJak91
I like how Jerry can switch to no-BS attitude and decide to get things done. Now that there is no point in niceties anymore. Kill or get killed and since they both tasted it before it is just a matter of opinion if the next guy related to this mess has to go. Sheesh!
I mean, is there even any need to talk about how deep both of them are in this now?
Both Rob and Mal wanted to leave this place. Both are dead. Jerry also had plans. He is dead. Looking at you now Dylan whether you are going to close the circle. Or start a new one with your death...
Moth
Now Jerry's got someone he can just be mad at, it's so much easier to focus his anger :D
Dylan's the last brother left, he's got one more chance to win his weird game, but then again I do like my symmetry :¬)
OhHeyItsMe
I can't think of anything witty to say, but I really love this page, so I want to leave a comment anyway c: That was en excellent chapter, I definitely didn't expect the Final Fight to be Mal vs Jerry, but I loved the surprise and it's honestly better than anything I could imagine <3
Moth
whispers*
this isn't the final fight
;)
Thank you <3
OhHeyItsMe
Oh, I meant the final fight of the chapter, I know there's more to come!
I somehow expected it would be Dylan confronting Mal, since he was the one who dragged Jerry into the hospital and was hoping for an... outcome? But it was Jerry's time to be in the spotlight and he did great!
BooImAGhost
dylan proceeds to weekend and bernie's robins corpse for the next two chapters
Moth
trick malachy into thinking he's still alive, he'll be like 'oh it's even now ok bye'
BlueDragon
I'm just seeing him drawing a transmutation circle on the ground with his blood and trying to bring Mal back XD
That'd be a twist.
Moth
You say that, but there was once a version...
Jordan Gray
OMG HOLY WHAT THIS IS PERFECTION
BlueDragon
Wow! Oh, that is too awesome XD
Nice!
Bolderousness
Is Dylan going to drag Robin's corpse to the Deepwell hospital?
Or kill someone else to make them a ghost for Mal.
Moth
That would be such a lovely present for someone he hates so much :D
Jordan Gray
Dylan… honey… you have got to stop solving all your problems by killing everyone, it's just, it's not really a recommended therapeutic approach sweetie
Moth
yes... the best way to stop himself going to prison... is to kill all the witnesses
looks at corey