This update huuurts. Jerry’s just having the worst kind of day, that poor boy. But at least they’re finally talking! Good decision to move this conversation to here, it flows really well this way
Thank you! His day has had way too many emotions crammed into it, I felt a it weird putting sad Jerry immediately after happy Jerry from the previous scene but I dunno, he's just feeling multiple things now
I mean, I'd be scared too. I mean just look at those high-tops! So last season.
But more seriously, I think it was a smart idea to move this discussion to this point. The ambiance where things have cooled down flows much better at Chris's vs earlier in the story.
Plus, I love how ghost mechanics are slipping in here.
As a (future) psychologist, I would really like to see everyone from this comic at a looong long therapy. I know there's sadly no hope for Jerry but can I at least assume Dylan gets some proffesional help in the future? c: He desperately needs it.
Also this is definitely my visually favorite page so far, I love everything about the 4th panel and the colors <3
So basically they can now attempt some sort of duplication glitch. Dylan needs to die wearing that jacket so he can come back wearing it and then somebody else will take the real one and... huh. lmao
For real though: I hope Jerry can forgive him next and move on. What is done is done. He should find real peace as a ghost. Slowly but surely I do not even want to see Dylan punished... So many catalysts to everything so what is even fair at this point.
Author Note
Moth
A lot of this conversation is effectively what I moved from the start of Deepwell because I didn't want to break the flow, so
They're gonna talk at last!
Comments
Microraptor
The last panel: Surprise legs!
Moth
hfhhfkkj
surprise legs are always very scary
griffsketch
Ahhh chest pains
This update huuurts. Jerry’s just having the worst kind of day, that poor boy. But at least they’re finally talking! Good decision to move this conversation to here, it flows really well this way
Moth
Thank you! His day has had way too many emotions crammed into it, I felt a it weird putting sad Jerry immediately after happy Jerry from the previous scene but I dunno, he's just feeling multiple things now
Wooster
I mean, I'd be scared too. I mean just look at those high-tops! So last season.
But more seriously, I think it was a smart idea to move this discussion to this point. The ambiance where things have cooled down flows much better at Chris's vs earlier in the story.
Plus, I love how ghost mechanics are slipping in here.
Moth
look it's still 2016 in this story, who knows what fashion was doing back then
Thanks! I also rewrote this scene a lot to try not to make it huuugely long but still explain all the things it needed to
OhHeyItsMe
As a (future) psychologist, I would really like to see everyone from this comic at a looong long therapy. I know there's sadly no hope for Jerry but can I at least assume Dylan gets some proffesional help in the future? c: He desperately needs it.
Also this is definitely my visually favorite page so far, I love everything about the 4th panel and the colors <3
Moth
Thank you! I was happy with those panels too, using purple and green was fun!
And yeahhh a bit of therapising wouldn't be amiss, I'll send them to you o future psychologist ;)
Mellenade
The dialogue on this page is really nice, especially the first panel
Moth
Thank you! :D
MadJak91
So basically they can now attempt some sort of duplication glitch. Dylan needs to die wearing that jacket so he can come back wearing it and then somebody else will take the real one and... huh. lmao
For real though: I hope Jerry can forgive him next and move on. What is done is done. He should find real peace as a ghost. Slowly but surely I do not even want to see Dylan punished... So many catalysts to everything so what is even fair at this point.
Moth
Forget factories and production lines this is the true way to mass produce a product!
At this point perhaps Dylan has suffered enough