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Author Note

13th Mar 2019, 3:16 PM edit | delete

END of chapter
What are you gonna do, Dyl? I'm sure it will be good and nice and not get anyone into any trouble.


I thumbnailed all of the next chapter and it ended up super short again, now I've gotta thumbnail the ast chapter and see if there's any moving about/adding stuff that can be done to make it more sensible. I'll post the cover on saturday, probably go straight into the next chapter on wednesday. cheers.



Comments

13th Mar 2019, 5:16 PM edit | delete | reply

OHHHHHHH MAN DYLAN'S GOT A PLAN AND IT'S GONNA GET SERIOUS.

I love how the brothers are both in on this. Such a nice change from how they were before.

Great way to end this chapter! And congrats on the thumbnailing! Best of luck!


13th Mar 2019, 5:17 PM edit | delete | reply

((this is wr3h i forgot to sign in because i got too excited LOL))


13th Mar 2019, 8:21 PM edit | delete | reply

LOL

i can't believe all it took to bring them together was one of them dying and the other getting a massive haunting


13th Mar 2019, 5:30 PM edit | delete | reply

Dear GOD that grin. Dylan, what in the hell are you planning? I also love how nonchalant Jerry is about finding out he probably killed someone...but to be fair, the dude’s still around and Jer is in the same boat.

Maaan, this page. There’s just Too Much Good Stuff(TM). Jeremy sticking by his brother, poor Dylan having to vicariously experience being dead, the suspense of whatever he is about to do regarding Robin, that last callback line to chapter fkn one - it’s all so intense and feels like it’s only ramping up. Mad kudos my dude


13th Mar 2019, 9:52 PM edit | delete | reply

it's always nice to see him smile : )

Jerry's barely paying attention to what Dylan's saying, he's kind of babbling so

Hehehee thanks :D Yeah dylan got smacked in the face with ten years of isolation packed into a couple minutes. things are going well.


13th Mar 2019, 5:31 PM edit | delete | reply

This has been such a fantastic, wild ride! I'm sure the upcoming pages will top it and give us an interesting resolution, but in the meantime, I've really enjoyed the reveals and character development up to this point. For better or worse, Malachy has been a (positive?) influence on Jerry's and Dylan's relationship as brothers. Maybe they'll both come out better for the experience.


13th Mar 2019, 9:55 PM edit | delete | reply

Thank you very much! There's a lot I would do better if I started over, but I'm pretty proud of it as a whole, particularly the last few chapters :D

And maybe Malachy should look into becoming a therapist, he's brought these boys so close together!


13th Mar 2019, 6:43 PM edit | delete | reply

Hhmm...that is NOT smile of a man with something nice in mind.


13th Mar 2019, 9:54 PM edit | delete | reply

the dimples of a sweet innocent cherub : )


13th Mar 2019, 7:09 PM edit | delete | reply

I like how Jerry can switch to no-BS attitude and decide to get things done. Now that there is no point in niceties anymore. Kill or get killed and since they both tasted it before it is just a matter of opinion if the next guy related to this mess has to go. Sheesh!
I mean, is there even any need to talk about how deep both of them are in this now?

Both Rob and Mal wanted to leave this place. Both are dead. Jerry also had plans. He is dead. Looking at you now Dylan whether you are going to close the circle. Or start a new one with your death...


13th Mar 2019, 9:57 PM edit | delete | reply

Now Jerry's got someone he can just be mad at, it's so much easier to focus his anger :D

Dylan's the last brother left, he's got one more chance to win his weird game, but then again I do like my symmetry :¬)


13th Mar 2019, 8:00 PM edit | delete | reply

I can't think of anything witty to say, but I really love this page, so I want to leave a comment anyway c: That was en excellent chapter, I definitely didn't expect the Final Fight to be Mal vs Jerry, but I loved the surprise and it's honestly better than anything I could imagine <3


13th Mar 2019, 9:53 PM edit | delete | reply

whispers*
this isn't the final fight

;)

Thank you <3


14th Mar 2019, 7:09 AM edit | delete | reply

Oh, I meant the final fight of the chapter, I know there's more to come!
I somehow expected it would be Dylan confronting Mal, since he was the one who dragged Jerry into the hospital and was hoping for an... outcome? But it was Jerry's time to be in the spotlight and he did great!


14th Mar 2019, 5:04 AM edit | delete | reply

dylan proceeds to weekend and bernie's robins corpse for the next two chapters


14th Mar 2019, 11:01 AM edit | delete | reply

trick malachy into thinking he's still alive, he'll be like 'oh it's even now ok bye'


15th Mar 2019, 4:20 AM edit | delete | reply

I'm just seeing him drawing a transmutation circle on the ground with his blood and trying to bring Mal back XD

That'd be a twist.


16th Mar 2019, 12:33 AM edit | delete | reply

You say that, but there was once a version...
image


16th Mar 2019, 4:15 AM edit | delete | reply

OMG HOLY WHAT THIS IS PERFECTION


16th Mar 2019, 4:39 AM edit | delete | reply

Wow! Oh, that is too awesome XD

Nice!


15th Mar 2019, 3:09 PM edit | delete | reply

Is Dylan going to drag Robin's corpse to the Deepwell hospital?

Or kill someone else to make them a ghost for Mal.


16th Mar 2019, 12:31 AM edit | delete | reply

That would be such a lovely present for someone he hates so much :D


16th Mar 2019, 4:16 AM edit | delete | reply

Dylan… honey… you have got to stop solving all your problems by killing everyone, it's just, it's not really a recommended therapeutic approach sweetie


17th Mar 2019, 12:23 AM edit | delete | reply

yes... the best way to stop himself going to prison... is to kill all the witnesses

looks at corey



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