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6th Feb 2019, 3:09 PM edit | delete

'I'll join my brother in London, he'll set me up'

Here comes trouble!



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6th Feb 2019, 4:06 PM edit | delete | reply

AAh so smol, so innocent
I'm sure they'll grow up to be sensitive and responsible adults, what can go wrong?


6th Feb 2019, 4:32 PM edit | delete | reply

they're only 17 now, they still have time
Or Dylan does anyway rip


6th Feb 2019, 4:25 PM edit | delete | reply

Malachy: "Daron doesn't even have an inexplicable white wisp of hair, so how can he be our dad!?"


6th Feb 2019, 4:32 PM edit | delete | reply

HAHAh true actually, they get the white from their mum.whose name is Sharon. Because I thought that was funny.


6th Feb 2019, 4:36 PM edit | delete | reply

Hmm… "The longer they keep me here the worse I feel."

That tidbit aside, assuming Malachy's been poisoning Dylan's brain since roughly then, I wonder if it relates to Dylan's relationship with his foster(?) dad and how it's soured.


6th Feb 2019, 4:57 PM edit | delete | reply

The amount of resentment Malachy holds towards his parents/step parents could definitely seep through.


6th Feb 2019, 5:11 PM edit | delete | reply

I.... I spent about 3 whole minutes reading this page and thinking he was just saying 'Malarkey', until everything finally clicked into place


6th Feb 2019, 5:17 PM edit | delete | reply

OH NO
he has a very versatile name when u think about it


6th Feb 2019, 5:11 PM edit | delete | reply

Little Rob shoulder hit Little Jerry. And then it all went to hell years later. Welp.

When you look at Malachy like this he already has that Suit Jerry expression and smirk. tbh, I am super interested how in the hell he got those ghostly powers since he seems very well aware they are useful. My guess is even he was already possessed by something but in that case I can hardly say what. Hm. So I will go with that it evolved from the already mentioned resentment. Talk about possibly actual vengeful spirit, haha.


6th Feb 2019, 5:17 PM edit | delete | reply

He's supposed to have barged into Dylan, they swapped hairstyles since then haha
Malachy's uh, also been dead for a *lot* longer than Jerry, had a bit of time to learn ;)


6th Feb 2019, 5:39 PM edit | delete | reply

Ah! Sorry then :D

Yup. Even if you will not get much into it, it will be fine with me but I am kind of hoping we will learn what is actually going on with the ghosts and how is that possible. That is all :>
I like points of origin in this sort of stories but they do not have to happen. Just a nice bonus!


6th Feb 2019, 7:49 PM edit | delete | reply

Solid brotherly love. But oof. “The longer they keep me here the worse I feel” is kinda heartbreaking. Sounds like he feels something coming on but he’s still got no clue that he’s gonna die from it


6th Feb 2019, 8:14 PM edit | delete | reply

it was just an appendectomy, that couldn't be a big problem right? he just wants to leave already!


6th Feb 2019, 8:29 PM edit | delete | reply

I do hope his mother can find an openining for a funeral in her busy schedule


6th Feb 2019, 8:57 PM edit | delete | reply

hmm i imagine him being cremated on the cheap and illegally scattered over some family grave
so she'll probably be there


6th Feb 2019, 9:51 PM edit | delete | reply

That is

horribly sad

Just noticed you included Jerry’s Cthulhu shirt though which is a delightful little detail


8th Feb 2019, 9:10 PM edit | delete | reply

damn people be droppin like flies moth


8th Feb 2019, 10:19 PM edit | delete | reply

ahh he died ages ago, doesn't count



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